Chapter
14
On Tuesday evening, Goldie tapped away on her
laptop, recording the discussion from the church Building Committee. Eight
other people sat at the large round table in the church basement. Pastor Thomas
refereed the conversation, which was going in eight different directions. Goldie
typed furiously, trying to keep up.
She wouldn’t be surprised
if her laptop started smoking.
“We
need a good architectural firm.” Joe Cranston, one of the deacons, waved his
hand in the air. “I still say we hire Milton,
Trager, Reeves, Fitzsimmons, and Krober to do our church building design.”
Goldie
typed out his comment, getting lost after Reeves.
“But
they’re too expensive.” Frieda, as the owner of the Kaffee Klatch, was on the committee.
“I
agree with Frieda.” John Zeller, another business owner, nodded toward the
pastor. “They charge 12% of the total cost. That’s outrageous! We need someone
who only charges 8%.”
“Or
less.” As the treasurer, Wayne Huchel was taking his own notes.
Ryan’s
face popped into Goldie’s mind. If only they could hire him as their architect.
But she and Ryan were on the fritz, as Frieda would say, and it would be
awkward to be in meetings with him.
“Okay.”
Joe huffed out a breath. “Let me talk to Melvin Whitlock. I’m sure he would
only charge us 7%.”
Pastor
Thomas shook his head. “He’s designed two nightclubs in Knotty Pine, and
everyone knows it. I wish we could find a Christian architect.”
Goldie
typed out his words, then added “Ryan is a Christian” next to it. With a little
gasp, she deleted her comment.
The
pastor stood. “Since we can’t come to a consensus, let’s conclude our meeting.
I want each of you to pray specifically for a good, trustworthy architect who
won’t charge us too much.”
Should
Goldie mention Ryan?
Pastor
Thomas dismissed them, and the level of conversation increased as the committee
members left the room. Goldie closed her laptop and stored it in the case.
Frieda
sat down beside her. “Why were ya dating that grinning guy last night?”
Goldie
frowned. “Grinning guy? Oh! Brian!” She laughed. “He did have a toothy grin,
didn’t he?”
“But
why were ya dating him and not Ryan?”
“It’s a long story.”
“I
have time.” Frieda folded her hands on the table and settled in her chair.
Goldie
sighed. “I was supposed to date Brian on Friday night, but he had an accident
at work and ended up in the hospital. Ryan came by my house and pretended he
was my blind date.”
“Pretended?
How did Ryan know about the blind date? What happened when he picked you up?”
Even though no one else
was in the room, Goldie leaned toward Frieda and lowered her voice. “He came to
the door and handed me a letter from Jessie.” She tapped her lips with her
finger. “Come to think of it, he was trying to talk, but I kept cutting him off.
I thought he was the almost-mute Brian, and I was nervous. It didn’t help that
he was so handsome. I was trying to do the talking for both of us.” Her
shoulders drooped. “I never gave him a chance to explain.”
“Then you should ask his
forgiveness.”
Goldie looked at Frieda,
a flash of anger zipping through her. “He should ask my forgiveness! He had plenty of time to spell out his
predicament!”
Shaking her head, Frieda
pursed her lips. “Goldie, see here now. I watched you and Ryan at the Kaffee Klatch. You have that chemistry a
couple needs. No matter how it happened, you need to get back with him.”
Goldie thought about
that. They did have chemistry! “Oh,
Frieda! I’ve made a terrible mess of things. Ryan came by my house yesterday
morning, and I think he was going to explain then, but I was mad about him
being an imposter.” Her heart plummeted. “I was so mean to him. I’m ashamed of
myself.”
“Well, then! You can
start over.”
“Ryan will never forgive
me.”
“You’ll never know unless
ya ask.” Frieda placed her hand on Goldie’s arm. “He seems like an
even-tempered guy. Forgive him in your heart for being an imposter, and then ya
need to ask his forgiveness for being mean. I say he’ll grant it.”
Goldie nodded. “He
deserves another opportunity, but I don’t. I deserve a guy like Brian
Choderski—no, that’s not right. Choderhumski?”
“Chodakowski.” Frieda
clicked her tongue. “Don’t sell yourself short, Goldie. Ryan really likes ya.
Give him a chance.”
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Awesome, very believable.
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