Monday, December 10, 2012

With the Bookies


In DAAG, our continued story, Janelle has been abducted by Cliff and Monty.


Chapter Twenty-five


An hour and a half later, after driving through several small towns, Cliff turned right on a side road and pulled into an abandoned gas station. Tall weeds grew up between the cracks in the concrete. The gas pumps had been removed and the windows of the station were boarded up.
         “Here’s our dream house.” Cliff rolled past the heavy metal door and parked at the side of the building. “We’ll just hunker down for a while.”
         Janelle thought of the cell phone in her purse. If she could call Ben…
But could she trust him? She felt betrayed. He said he was a Christian yet he gambled away his money. She pictured him rolling dice at the floating casinos on the Mississippi River that docked beside the St. Louis arch. Perhaps he was like his mother, Lyssa, who only talked about religion.  
What if Ben let her rot in this forsaken place?
A quiet anger surged through her. His betting had caused her to get kidnapped. No, she wasn’t going to call him.
But she couldn’t call her dad. He was out of town. Her sister would panic. Sheriff Horton. She could call him—if she could remember the number to the sheriff’s office.
         Cliff killed the engine. “Okay, sweetheart, this is it. Now don’t try any funny business or we’ll have to lock you up.” He got out and opened her door.
         Janelle’s stomach growled, and she glanced at her watch as she walked to the small building. Almost seven.
         “Ladies first.” Cliff opened the metal door and motioned Janelle inside.
         The smell of car oil assailed her as she entered. Monty flipped a switch by the door and two naked light bulbs, hanging by wires from the ceiling, lit the room. Janelle could barely make out the color of the floor tile, it was so dirty.
         “Sit here, doll face.” Cliff slid a chair with a cracked vinyl seat toward her. “We’ll call Thorne and see if he wants you back.”
         Janelle perched on the uncomfortable chair, cradling her purse in her lap.
         Cliff took off his sunglasses. His pockmarked face had a scar above the right eye. He walked behind a tall counter and pulled an old red desk phone from underneath.
Janelle raised an eyebrow. This place had phone service?
Monty sat on another vinyl chair next to the boarded windows.
         “Okay, what’s Thorne’s number?” Cliff picked up the receiver, and a loud dial tone buzzed.
         “That’s easy.” Monty folded his arms, looking smug. “2-4-6-8. Who do we ap-pre-ci-ate?”
         Cliff ignored the cheer. “Are you sure? I didn’t think the numbers were in order like that.”
         “They’re not in order. In order would be 1-2-3-4.”
         Cliff shook his head. “I mean even order.”
         “I’m telling you, they’re not even in order.”
         Janelle rolled her eyes. She’d been kidnapped by Abbott and Costello.
         Cliff looked perturbed. “Okay, okay. I’ll try it.” It was an old rotary phone, and he had to wait as each number spun around. First he dialed the Greenvale prefix, then the number.
         Janelle could hear a buzz with the ring on the other end. After the third ring, a faint voice said hello.         
         “Oh, hello. Uh, Thorne? Is this the Thorne residence?” Cliff clapped his hand over the mouthpiece. “What’s Thorne’s first name?”
         Monty shrugged. “Beats me.”
         Cliff spoke into the phone. “I’m looking for Jed Thorne’s son. Is this—” A barrage of unintelligible words filled the room. Cliff nodded. “Oh, I’m sorry, ma’am. Yes, I must have the wrong number. You’re right, ma’am. Goodbye.” He slammed the phone down. “Monty! That’s the wrong number!”
         “Well, sorry.” Monty didn’t look sorry. “That’s the number I got out of the phone book.”
         “That lady’s name is Babcock—not even close to Thorne.” Cliff hit his fist on the counter. “Now what are we going to do? I’m not letting this girl go until Thorne gives us the money.”
         A prick of fear pierced Janelle. She could be stuck here all weekend before anyone knew she was gone.

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         To be continued…

1 comment:

  1. I love this scene. I can almost picture the two kidnappers!!

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